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by rairaichan0323
Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:28 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls leave comment- Task2- computer replace the newspapers
Replies: 2
Views: 1987

Re: Pls leave comment- Task2- computer replace the newspaper

Thank you so much Liz, u gave me a lot of valuable comments. I have some questions.
if I would like to use other words which is same meaning as people then which words I can use it?
could u point out my errors too. I always have difficulties about tense, article and word order.

thank you very much!!
by rairaichan0323
Sat Nov 15, 2014 4:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls leave comment- Task2- computer replace the newspapers
Replies: 2
Views: 1987

Pls leave comment- Task2- computer replace the newspapers

It is agreed that computers will replace paper newspapers, books etc. To what extent do you agree or disagree. In a contemporary society, individuals are easy to obtain the most update information by a computer. Some people would contend that the traditional paper medium will be replaced by the inte...
by rairaichan0323
Sat Nov 01, 2014 1:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

Flcik, could u pls help me to check it? thank you very much!!
by rairaichan0323
Wed Oct 29, 2014 5:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

Thank you Flick!! could u check this one too? thanks a lot!! Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Traffic and contamination issues are continuously...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Oct 16, 2014 8:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: another tragedy
Replies: 7
Views: 2536

Re: another tragedy

Hi Allen,

may I ask u what is Type A. u mean from this NOV, AUS will accept the TOFFEL's result? thanks
by rairaichan0323
Wed Oct 08, 2014 9:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

Flick could you pls check it for me? thank you!! It is the government’s responsibility to look after people with problems such as the unemployed and the homeless. Do you agree or disagree? In a contemporary society, citizens have an obligation to pay taxes to the administration. As the government ca...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Oct 08, 2014 9:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls check it- government has a duty or not-Task2
Replies: 0
Views: 561

pls check it- government has a duty or not-Task2

It is the government’s responsibility to look after people with problems such as the unemployed and the homeless. Do you agree or disagree? In a contemporary society, citizens have an obligation to pay taxes to the administration. As the government can employ those revenues to provide services to t...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Oct 02, 2014 4:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

Thank you Flick!! Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion. In a modern society, adolescents often alter their job easily. While some people would argue tha...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Oct 02, 2014 4:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls help- work for the same company or not - Task2
Replies: 0
Views: 1650

Pls help- work for the same company or not - Task2

Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion. In a modern society, adolescents often alter their job easily. While some people would argue that employees shoul...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Oct 01, 2014 12:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it - apology late return to work - task 1
Replies: 2
Views: 762

Re: pls grade it - apology late return to work - task 1

thank you Flick! I already checked all of them. really thank you very much!! :D
by rairaichan0323
Mon Sep 29, 2014 4:06 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

More and more people choose to live by themselves in the recent years. Why is the case and it is a positive or negative development of society. In a contemporary society, people are increasingly tending to live alone in the recent years. Yet, it remains some disagreement as to whether the overall e...
by rairaichan0323
Mon Sep 29, 2014 4:06 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: help grade it - live by themselves- Task 2
Replies: 0
Views: 454

help grade it - live by themselves- Task 2

More and more people choose to live by themselves in the recent years. Why is the case and it is a positive or negative development of society. In a contemporary society, people are increasingly tending to live alone in the recent years. Yet, it remains some disagreement as to whether the overall e...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:04 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

You are attending an intensive language training class. You have difficulty following one of the courses. Write to the course tutor to describe your difficulty and ask for advice. Dear Mr. Chen, I am writing to ask for your assistance. Would you please give me advice regarding to the English speaki...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:04 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it- seek for helping-Task 1
Replies: 0
Views: 451

pls grade it- seek for helping-Task 1

You are attending an intensive language training class. You have difficulty following one of the courses. Write to the course tutor to describe your difficulty and ask for advice. Dear Mr. Chen, I am writing to ask for your assistance. Would you please give me advice regarding to the English speaki...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Sep 25, 2014 11:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

You are travelling and have lost something that is expensive. The lost item is insured. Write to the insurance company to describe how it happened and ask for compensation. Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Janis Lee and the holder of the above insurance policy. I am writing to intend to lodge an insura...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Sep 25, 2014 11:00 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls Help- claim insurance- Task 1
Replies: 0
Views: 410

pls Help- claim insurance- Task 1

You are travelling and have lost something that is expensive. The lost item is insured. Write to the insurance company to describe how it happened and ask for compensation. Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Janis Lee and the holder of the above insurance policy. I am writing to intend to lodge an insura...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Sep 25, 2014 7:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help- recommend restaruant- Task 1
Replies: 0
Views: 416

pls help- recommend restaruant- Task 1

You recently had a meal in a restaurant and you enjoyed the food and service. Write a letter to a local newspaper to recommend the restaurant. Dear Editor, I am writing to recommend a French restaurant which is called the ABC restaurant and located in the Oxford Street. First of all, the price of t...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Sep 25, 2014 7:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

You recently had a meal in a restaurant and you enjoyed the food and service. Write a letter to a local newspaper to recommend the restaurant. Dear Editor, I am writing to recommend a French restaurant which is called the ABC restaurant and located in the Oxford Street. First of all, the price of t...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Sep 24, 2014 9:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

Thank you very much for ur helping, Flick. I am really appreciative of all your effort to us!! would u pls keep to check our essays. thanks a lot!! You are on a holiday but you have realized that you are not able to return to work on time. Write a letter to your boss to explain why and ask for permi...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Sep 24, 2014 3:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it - apology late return to work - task 1
Replies: 2
Views: 762

pls grade it - apology late return to work - task 1

You are on a holiday but you have realized that you are not able to return to work on time. Write a letter to your boss to explain why and ask for permission to return at a later time. Dear Mr. Lee, I am writing to ask for your approval for my late return to work due to my son’s illness. I am now o...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Sep 19, 2014 3:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

You have borrowed 10 library books and due to urgent mater, you will not be able to return them on time. Write a letter politely explaining your position and requesting that your fine be withheld. Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Janis Lee. I am writing to you regard to my library books which are due in ...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Sep 19, 2014 3:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it - write a letter to manager regarding conferenc
Replies: 0
Views: 458

pls grade it - write a letter to manager regarding conferenc

Write a letter to your manager regarding the recent conference you attended • how the conference benefited you • what you are going to present to your colleague • why you thing it will benefit them Dear Mr. Lee, I am writing to you regard to the conference which I had attended recently. This confere...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Sep 19, 2014 3:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

Write a letter to your manager regarding the recent conference you attended • how the conference benefited you • what you are going to present to your colleague • why you thing it will benefit them Dear Mr. Lee, I am writing to you regard to the conference which I had attended recently. This confer...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Sep 19, 2014 1:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls review it - late to return books - request
Replies: 0
Views: 690

pls review it - late to return books - request

You have borrowed 10 library books and due to urgent mater, you will not be able to return them on time. Write a letter politely explaining your position and requesting that your fine be withheld. Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Janis Lee. I am writing to you regard to my library books which are due in t...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Sep 19, 2014 12:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Replies: 30
Views: 10805

Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time

Thank you Flick!! could u help me to check this one too ? thanks a lot!! In many countries, students must leave school because of their poor behaviours. Some people think it is a good idea, while others argue that there are other ways to solve this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ...