Thank you so much Liz, u gave me a lot of valuable comments. I have some questions.
if I would like to use other words which is same meaning as people then which words I can use it?
could u point out my errors too. I always have difficulties about tense, article and word order.
thank you very much!!
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- Thu Nov 20, 2014 2:28 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Pls leave comment- Task2- computer replace the newspapers
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- Views: 1987
- Sat Nov 15, 2014 4:52 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Pls leave comment- Task2- computer replace the newspapers
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Pls leave comment- Task2- computer replace the newspapers
It is agreed that computers will replace paper newspapers, books etc. To what extent do you agree or disagree. In a contemporary society, individuals are easy to obtain the most update information by a computer. Some people would contend that the traditional paper medium will be replaced by the inte...
- Sat Nov 01, 2014 1:16 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
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Flcik, could u pls help me to check it? thank you very much!!
- Wed Oct 29, 2014 5:56 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
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Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Thank you Flick!! could u check this one too? thanks a lot!! Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Traffic and contamination issues are continuously...
- Thu Oct 16, 2014 8:35 am
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- Topic: another tragedy
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Re: another tragedy
Hi Allen,
may I ask u what is Type A. u mean from this NOV, AUS will accept the TOFFEL's result? thanks
may I ask u what is Type A. u mean from this NOV, AUS will accept the TOFFEL's result? thanks
- Wed Oct 08, 2014 9:53 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
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- Views: 10805
Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Flick could you pls check it for me? thank you!! It is the government’s responsibility to look after people with problems such as the unemployed and the homeless. Do you agree or disagree? In a contemporary society, citizens have an obligation to pay taxes to the administration. As the government ca...
- Wed Oct 08, 2014 9:52 am
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- Topic: pls check it- government has a duty or not-Task2
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pls check it- government has a duty or not-Task2
It is the government’s responsibility to look after people with problems such as the unemployed and the homeless. Do you agree or disagree? In a contemporary society, citizens have an obligation to pay taxes to the administration. As the government can employ those revenues to provide services to t...
- Thu Oct 02, 2014 4:43 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
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- Views: 10805
Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Thank you Flick!! Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion. In a modern society, adolescents often alter their job easily. While some people would argue tha...
- Thu Oct 02, 2014 4:43 am
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- Topic: Pls help- work for the same company or not - Task2
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Pls help- work for the same company or not - Task2
Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion. In a modern society, adolescents often alter their job easily. While some people would argue that employees shoul...
- Wed Oct 01, 2014 12:30 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls grade it - apology late return to work - task 1
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- Views: 762
Re: pls grade it - apology late return to work - task 1
thank you Flick! I already checked all of them. really thank you very much!!
- Mon Sep 29, 2014 4:06 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
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- Views: 10805
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More and more people choose to live by themselves in the recent years. Why is the case and it is a positive or negative development of society. In a contemporary society, people are increasingly tending to live alone in the recent years. Yet, it remains some disagreement as to whether the overall e...
- Mon Sep 29, 2014 4:06 am
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- Topic: help grade it - live by themselves- Task 2
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- Views: 454
help grade it - live by themselves- Task 2
More and more people choose to live by themselves in the recent years. Why is the case and it is a positive or negative development of society. In a contemporary society, people are increasingly tending to live alone in the recent years. Yet, it remains some disagreement as to whether the overall e...
- Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:04 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
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- Views: 10805
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You are attending an intensive language training class. You have difficulty following one of the courses. Write to the course tutor to describe your difficulty and ask for advice. Dear Mr. Chen, I am writing to ask for your assistance. Would you please give me advice regarding to the English speaki...
- Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:04 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls grade it- seek for helping-Task 1
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pls grade it- seek for helping-Task 1
You are attending an intensive language training class. You have difficulty following one of the courses. Write to the course tutor to describe your difficulty and ask for advice. Dear Mr. Chen, I am writing to ask for your assistance. Would you please give me advice regarding to the English speaki...
- Thu Sep 25, 2014 11:01 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
- Replies: 30
- Views: 10805
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You are travelling and have lost something that is expensive. The lost item is insured. Write to the insurance company to describe how it happened and ask for compensation. Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Janis Lee and the holder of the above insurance policy. I am writing to intend to lodge an insura...
- Thu Sep 25, 2014 11:00 am
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- Topic: pls Help- claim insurance- Task 1
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pls Help- claim insurance- Task 1
You are travelling and have lost something that is expensive. The lost item is insured. Write to the insurance company to describe how it happened and ask for compensation. Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Janis Lee and the holder of the above insurance policy. I am writing to intend to lodge an insura...
- Thu Sep 25, 2014 7:38 am
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- Topic: pls help- recommend restaruant- Task 1
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- Views: 416
pls help- recommend restaruant- Task 1
You recently had a meal in a restaurant and you enjoyed the food and service. Write a letter to a local newspaper to recommend the restaurant. Dear Editor, I am writing to recommend a French restaurant which is called the ABC restaurant and located in the Oxford Street. First of all, the price of t...
- Thu Sep 25, 2014 7:36 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
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- Views: 10805
Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
You recently had a meal in a restaurant and you enjoyed the food and service. Write a letter to a local newspaper to recommend the restaurant. Dear Editor, I am writing to recommend a French restaurant which is called the ABC restaurant and located in the Oxford Street. First of all, the price of t...
- Wed Sep 24, 2014 9:09 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
- Replies: 30
- Views: 10805
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Thank you very much for ur helping, Flick. I am really appreciative of all your effort to us!! would u pls keep to check our essays. thanks a lot!! You are on a holiday but you have realized that you are not able to return to work on time. Write a letter to your boss to explain why and ask for permi...
- Wed Sep 24, 2014 3:16 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls grade it - apology late return to work - task 1
- Replies: 2
- Views: 762
pls grade it - apology late return to work - task 1
You are on a holiday but you have realized that you are not able to return to work on time. Write a letter to your boss to explain why and ask for permission to return at a later time. Dear Mr. Lee, I am writing to ask for your approval for my late return to work due to my son’s illness. I am now o...
- Fri Sep 19, 2014 3:46 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
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- Views: 10805
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You have borrowed 10 library books and due to urgent mater, you will not be able to return them on time. Write a letter politely explaining your position and requesting that your fine be withheld. Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Janis Lee. I am writing to you regard to my library books which are due in ...
- Fri Sep 19, 2014 3:21 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls grade it - write a letter to manager regarding conferenc
- Replies: 0
- Views: 458
pls grade it - write a letter to manager regarding conferenc
Write a letter to your manager regarding the recent conference you attended • how the conference benefited you • what you are going to present to your colleague • why you thing it will benefit them Dear Mr. Lee, I am writing to you regard to the conference which I had attended recently. This confere...
- Fri Sep 19, 2014 3:16 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
- Replies: 30
- Views: 10805
Re: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
Write a letter to your manager regarding the recent conference you attended • how the conference benefited you • what you are going to present to your colleague • why you thing it will benefit them Dear Mr. Lee, I am writing to you regard to the conference which I had attended recently. This confer...
- Fri Sep 19, 2014 1:41 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls review it - late to return books - request
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- Views: 690
pls review it - late to return books - request
You have borrowed 10 library books and due to urgent mater, you will not be able to return them on time. Write a letter politely explaining your position and requesting that your fine be withheld. Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Janis Lee. I am writing to you regard to my library books which are due in t...
- Fri Sep 19, 2014 12:10 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: i need your help-task 2- children too much free time
- Replies: 30
- Views: 10805
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Thank you Flick!! could u help me to check this one too ? thanks a lot!! In many countries, students must leave school because of their poor behaviours. Some people think it is a good idea, while others argue that there are other ways to solve this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ...