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by bond_bhai
Mon Mar 17, 2014 10:47 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: First Essay - Reviews please :)
Replies: 3
Views: 1138

Re: First Essay - Reviews please :)

Thanks a lot SyntaxFox for the review! Appreciate your help. I will certainly keep in mind the tips/corrections you have pointed out.
by bond_bhai
Sun Mar 16, 2014 8:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: First Essay - Reviews please :)
Replies: 3
Views: 1138

Re: First Essay - Reviews please :)

Any suggestions, please!
by bond_bhai
Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:30 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay and give a estimated band score. Thank
Replies: 2
Views: 950

Re: Please check my essay and give a estimated band score. T

I think its a great effort. However, I see some repetition of words. I suggest you look up some synonyms for children like youngsters, juveniles, teeenagers, kids etc.
by bond_bhai
Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: introduction: need your advices on writing more advanced
Replies: 6
Views: 2355

Re: introduction: need your advices on writing more advanced

I am no expert on this, but let me give it a shot - 1. Traffic congestion has been increasing in cities all over the world. This has made public transport a preferred choice of travel in urban areas. Especially the subway trains popularly called as Metros are hugely popular. 2. Globalization and adv...
by bond_bhai
Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:13 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Hello!
Replies: 1
Views: 728

Hello!

Hi there,
This is Ashwin from Bangalore! I have been leecher till now :) I am planning to take up IELTS sometime next month and hope to improve my English skills especially writing. Glad to be here and expect support from all members.

Thanks!
by bond_bhai
Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: First Essay - Reviews please :)
Replies: 3
Views: 1138

First Essay - Reviews please :)

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and giev your opinion. Answer: Creativity is a much d...