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- Thu Apr 10, 2014 7:14 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: An essay I did prior to the one I submitted last
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4113
Re: An essay I did prior to the one I submitted last
Hi Rosh, Your essay demonstrates your ability to write complex sentences, sometimes I think they are too complex for readers to grasp on the main idea of the sentence. There are several places where you have problems conjugating verbs. Overall, I don't think your answer is quite convincing for me. ...
- Thu Apr 10, 2014 7:13 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: An essay I did prior to the one I submitted last
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4113
Re: An essay I did prior to the one I submitted last
Hi Rosh, On the positive side, You have written a good essay with very complex structures. On the negative side, I think too many words, like what Allen said, you need to write around 275 words to fit all your points. If you write plenty of words, examiners find it difficult to go through all singl...
- Wed Apr 09, 2014 3:23 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: An essay I did prior to the one I submitted last
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4113
Re: An essay I did prior to the one I submitted last
Strong grammar. Would be band 7+
- Tue Apr 08, 2014 1:49 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please check my task 1 letter
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5333
Re: please check my task 1 letter
Hi Allen,
It's all up to your choice but the more details you could give, the better your letter/essay would be. That's just my personal opinion.
It's all up to your choice but the more details you could give, the better your letter/essay would be. That's just my personal opinion.
- Tue Apr 08, 2014 1:45 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: HELP ME ...GENERAL READING
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1224
Re: HELP ME ...GENERAL READING
Dust levels are controlled by spraying roads and stockpiles, and water pollution is controlled by carefully separating clean water runoff from runoff which contains sediments or salt from mine workings. The latter is treated and re-used for dust suppression To control dust at mine sites, mining com...
- Tue Apr 08, 2014 1:24 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please check my task 1 letter
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5333
Re: please check my task 1 letter
hi Allen, 1. When you mention that I need to use past tense. I think you are talking about my sentence below: Your services are excellent and that is why I always choose your hotel every time when I am in Beijing I used present tense because I believe these things are still true at present. Should I...
- Tue Apr 08, 2014 10:24 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please check my task 1 letter
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5333
Re: please check my task 1 letter
hi Chi, It was midnight, so I tried myself to fix it but failed in my attempt. Yes, you're right. I didn't read it carefully. Yes, it should be "suffering" - I made a mistake when I typed to fast. Your reason is appropriate. We suggest, if you do consider coming back to our hotel, always c...
- Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:56 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please check my task 1 letter
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5333
Re: please check my task 1 letter
Dear Mr Natarajan, I am so sorry for your unpleasant experience. We are quite aware that Melbourne's weather can change unexpectedly many times in a day. That is why we recommend visitors to Melbourne always carrying with them a jacket and an umbrella regardless of the season, and they should disre...
- Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:37 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please check my task 1 letter
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5333
Re: please check my task 1 letter
You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of the year and heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, give details of what was wrong, explain what you had to do overcome the pro...
- Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:23 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please check my task 1 letter
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5333
Re: please check my task 1 letter
You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of the year and heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, give details of what was wrong, explain what you had to do overcome the pro...
- Mon Apr 07, 2014 6:32 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task II
- Replies: 1
- Views: 794
Re: Task II
Question: Compare the advantage and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information.State which you consider to be most effective.comics,radio,books,television,films,theatre. Nowadays,it is becoming more common for people to use some tools of media,such as comics,book...
- Mon Apr 07, 2014 6:14 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: reading ielts academic
- Replies: 1
- Views: 744
Re: reading ielts academic
35-36/40 to get band 8 in Academicgarryswasti wrote:Hi everybody ,
I m a new member of this forum ..i m currently preparing for my IELTS ACADEMIC ..my query is how much do we need to score in reading so as to get a band 8..
- Mon Apr 07, 2014 9:42 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate Letter
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2739
Re: Please evaluate Letter
You have recently ordered an item through the Internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter: - describe what you purchased, - explain why you are not happy with the purchase, - tell them what you would like them to do about the situation. Dear Sir or Madam, Las...
- Mon Apr 07, 2014 9:24 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls help!! Task 1 apply the job
- Replies: 4
- Views: 5506
Re: pls help!! Task 1 apply the job
My version. However, I don't like it. Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to a job vacancy of your company as a tour guide, which I saw from an advertisement on Shenzhen Daily last week. I am very interested in this job and I believe I am a perfect candidate for it. I am an undergraduate in...
- Mon Apr 07, 2014 9:10 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls help!! Task 1 apply the job
- Replies: 4
- Views: 5506
Re: pls help!! Task 1 apply the job
You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city. Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In letter * give your reason for wanting the job. * explain why you think can do the job * describe the relevant experience Dear Sir/Madam, ...
- Sun Apr 06, 2014 10:28 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: new question and pls help!!Task 2
- Replies: 2
- Views: 918
Re: new question and pls help!!Task 2
Some people believe that travelling alone really benefits in learning a country's culture and experience, while others believe it is better to travel with someone you know. Discuss both these views and share your opinion. In this day and age, it seems that there is a significant increase in global ...
- Sun Apr 06, 2014 5:58 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing samples
- Replies: 2
- Views: 920
Re: Writing samples
IETLS Blog is a good siteMichelle_sutton wrote:Hey everyone,
I'm very new to the ielts, I need overall band 8. Just wondering where I can downlaod the writing sample for academic writing. I have been watching youtube videos from Ryan. That was very helpful. Thanks in advance ..
- Sun Apr 06, 2014 5:46 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my essay - Task 2
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1341
Re: Please evaluate my essay - Task 2
Hi Guru, Your result was very impressive. I've only achieved a band 7.5, so what I gave you was just my personal opinion and it may not be totally correct. Let's discuss your comments below. 2. I believe that the sentence "predominantly inactive lifestyle , thus leading to corpulence" shou...
- Sat Apr 05, 2014 6:50 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: SPeaking and writing partner(band 8)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 5330
Re: SPeaking and writing partner(band 8)
Hi,
I want to get band 8 too. Add me on Skype at andytruong1202
I want to get band 8 too. Add me on Skype at andytruong1202
- Sat Apr 05, 2014 6:08 pm
- Forum: Latest IELTS questions
- Topic: speaking
- Replies: 39
- Views: 17861
Re: speaking
Hi,
I once scored band 7.5 in Speaking. Add me if you wanna do some practices
My Skype ID is andytruong1202
I once scored band 7.5 in Speaking. Add me if you wanna do some practices
My Skype ID is andytruong1202
- Sat Apr 05, 2014 5:58 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 1 letter , is anybody able to check my work?
- Replies: 1
- Views: 746
Re: task 1 letter , is anybody able to check my work?
You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain what sort of job you would like, and say what experience and skills you have. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
- Sat Apr 05, 2014 5:32 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 - writing test. What band score would this essay be?
- Replies: 1
- Views: 926
Re: Task 2 - writing test. What band score would this essay
In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree? Multinational companies have spread around the globe. This is happening mainly because of globalization. The simple theo...
- Sat Apr 05, 2014 3:55 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: extend human life, <interesting topic task 2 >
- Replies: 3
- Views: 980
Re: extend human life, <interesting topic task 2 >
Hi Durai, Over the last decade, many scientific researchers, the world over, (its an idiom) But it doesn't fit well into the sentence in this case, so I'd use "around the world" to give the sentence better flow. have proved that there is a possibility of extending human life for more than ...
- Sat Apr 05, 2014 3:19 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate task 1
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2068
Re: Please evaluate task 1
Hi andytruong1202 please suggest me how can i improve my writing and avoid grammar mistakes .I shall be very thankful for your help Try to read as many letters as you can and rewrite these letters. Then learn good vocab and notice its usage. Then, you will automatically improve your writing over ti...
- Sat Apr 05, 2014 12:41 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate task 1
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2068
Re: Please evaluate task 1
hi,
TR: answer all the questions but not in details
Grammar & Vocab: lots of mistakes, and basic vocab, simple sentences.
Would be at 5.5 - 6 for this letter.
TR: answer all the questions but not in details
Grammar & Vocab: lots of mistakes, and basic vocab, simple sentences.
Would be at 5.5 - 6 for this letter.