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by andytruong1202
Wed Apr 02, 2014 9:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT - Writing Task 1 - Comments/Score?
Replies: 2
Views: 1027

Re: GT - Writing Task 1 - Comments/Score?

Write a letter to an English teacher whom you know and ask to borrow a few English books to help a child of your friends to study. Please say: -Give details of the child -when and where do you plan to teach him/her? -what books do you want to borrow? Dear Mr Ally, How have you been? I hope you are ...
by andytruong1202
Wed Apr 02, 2014 8:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please help me to correct my essay
Replies: 1
Views: 566

Re: please help me to correct my essay

Adult literacy rates (age 15 and over) In many countries around the world, many organizations are interested in the study of statistics of adult literacy rates. The chart shows the adult literacy rate for male and female who are 15 years old or above in several countries. Country D has the highest ...
by andytruong1202
Wed Apr 02, 2014 8:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls evaluate my essay!! thank you (Task2)
Replies: 3
Views: 980

Re: pls evaluate my essay!! thank you (Task2)

Some parents believe that it is good for children spend time on watching TV and computer games; but other parents believe that they should spend time on doing something else such as reading books. Agree or disagree with above statement. In the present age, children have many different ways to spend...
by andytruong1202
Tue Apr 01, 2014 5:33 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: My first writing task 2 in website please check and comment
Replies: 2
Views: 1936

Re: My first writing task 2 in website please check and comm

Writing topics : Many young people always change their job. What are the reason for that? Are the advantage outweigh disadvantage? In today’s world, people (should refer to young people) frequently change their jobs. This can be seen more often in young generation ( don't need this sentence ). It i...
by andytruong1202
Tue Apr 01, 2014 5:12 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please help me.fix my writing task 2 and grade it!
Replies: 3
Views: 831

Re: please help me.fix my writing task 2 and grade it!

my first writing! help me check errors pls Topic: to educate young people is the most important task for the governments all over the world. discuss views and give opinion. In these days , educating the young generation is contributed to the national development in many countries. While some people...
by andytruong1202
Tue Apr 01, 2014 4:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Evaluate my essay
Replies: 4
Views: 1067

Re: Please Evaluate my essay

Thank you very much andytruong1202. You actually corrected or changed what I struggled on what to write..I would love to get anything over 6 :) Do you really think it is good? Because when I read again I could only see that it is really bad. I meant by the sentence "what we benefit from the sm...
by andytruong1202
Tue Apr 01, 2014 4:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: climatic change <control by people> anyone there?
Replies: 5
Views: 2712

Re: climatic change <control by people> anyone there?

How about my version? can anyone help to assess it? Climate change has become one of the major challenges that our planet is facing. Some people believe that it is individuals rather than governments who should take responsibilities to address this problem. I disagree with this opinion. It is true ...
by andytruong1202
Mon Mar 31, 2014 4:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Evaluate my essay
Replies: 4
Views: 1067

Re: Please Evaluate my essay

Task- Smart devices have put all of the world’s information at our fingertips.What are the drawbacks of this development? The smartphone s , one of the greatest breakthroughs ever made, have revolutionised the way we access information in recent years. Now, all the information in the entire world i...
by andytruong1202
Sun Mar 30, 2014 4:40 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: looking for ielts speaking partners who are aiming for 7+
Replies: 5
Views: 1485

Re: looking for ielts speaking partners who are aiming for 7

I'm interested. I scored 7.5 in Speaking in my recent exam. I'd like to practice more. My Skype ID is andytruong1202
by andytruong1202
Sun Mar 30, 2014 4:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: climatic change <control by people> anyone there?
Replies: 5
Views: 2712

Re: climatic change <control by people> anyone there?

Scientists and the mass media are presenting more evidences of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their way of lifestyle to prevent further damage. To what extent do you agree or disagree? -------------------------...
by andytruong1202
Sun Mar 30, 2014 3:35 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: obesity <causes ;effects >
Replies: 6
Views: 5346

Re: obesity <causes ;effects >

All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Over the last decade, the...
by andytruong1202
Sun Mar 30, 2014 3:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 1
Replies: 4
Views: 2108

Re: pls give me a band score for Task 1

There is a swimming pool proposed to be built in your town. Write to the city council and say - Why is this swimming pool important to you? - Suggest where it should be built. - Why is it a good idea to have a swimming pool in the town and not outside of town? Dear Sir/Madam, I am delighted to lear...
by andytruong1202
Thu Mar 27, 2014 12:20 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay and give a estimated band score. Thank
Replies: 2
Views: 871

Re: Please check my essay and give a estimated band score. T

Thanks for the comment bond_bhai. ARe there anyone else to assess my essay please. Thanks in advance.
by andytruong1202
Tue Mar 18, 2014 9:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: task 1 Letter
Replies: 1
Views: 953

Re: task 1 Letter

Last week, you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately when you left the plane, you left behind a bag. You didn’t remember about the bag until you go your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. Explain what was happened, describe bag and it contents and say what you would like them to do about it....
by andytruong1202
Tue Mar 18, 2014 9:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please grade my letter. thank you ( general task 1)
Replies: 1
Views: 1079

Re: please grade my letter. thank you ( general task 1)

Write a letter to a friend in a foreign country who has invited you to their wedding and say: - Why can’t you attend the wedding? - Tell them about the gift you are sending. - Suggest how you can meet after the wedding. Dear Jenny, I am glad to hear that you are getting married next Sunday and than...
by andytruong1202
Mon Mar 17, 2014 4:03 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please grade my essay !! thanks a lot
Replies: 2
Views: 1040

Re: please grade my essay !! thanks a lot

Money help us bring happiness but some people think that extra money creates problems also. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and examples from your knowledge and experience It is generally recognized that money assists PEOPLE to discover happiness. Throughout history, humanity HAS frequently ...
by andytruong1202
Mon Mar 17, 2014 3:21 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please take a look at my essay, good enough for 7?
Replies: 4
Views: 2248

Re: please take a look at my essay, good enough for 7?

Write an essay on following Money help us bring happiness but some people think that extra money creates problems also. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and examples from your knowledge and experience. It is a frequent(HOT) topic of discussion REGARDING whether money brings happiness to peopl...
by andytruong1202
Mon Mar 17, 2014 1:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: 1st attempt on General writing task 1. Pls Help to review!
Replies: 2
Views: 933

Re: 1st attempt on General writing task 1. Pls Help to revie

Write a letter to the manager of a taxi service that you have hired and say - When and where did you use this service? - What was the problem? - What do you want the manger to do about it? Dear Sir OR MADAM, I am writing in regard to a problem with your company's taxi service that I encountered on ...
by andytruong1202
Mon Mar 17, 2014 1:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please kindly grade my essay ( general TASK 1)
Replies: 5
Views: 1494

Re: please kindly grade my essay ( general TASK 1)

You have recently bought a toy over the internet. When it was delivered you have found some problems with it. Write a letter to the toy company manager and say - Give details of the purchase. - Describe the problem. - What do you expect the company to do about it? Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to co...
by andytruong1202
Mon Mar 17, 2014 1:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my introduction part.
Replies: 8
Views: 2387

Re: Please assess my introduction part.

Dear Ryan and friends.. I am going to take General IELTS in a month. I purpose to get at least 6. I have been struggling to write an effective introduction for a while..Although I believe I am getting better at this, I still need to make sure if I am on the right way. I am going to post an introduc...
by andytruong1202
Tue Mar 11, 2014 11:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay and give a estimated band score. Thank
Replies: 2
Views: 871

Please check my essay and give a estimated band score. Thank

QUESTION----Some parents and teachers believe that children’s behaviour should be strictly controlled, while others think that children should be allowed to grow up in their own way. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. It is believed by a sizable number of adults that parents and teachers...
by andytruong1202
Mon Mar 10, 2014 10:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Help me correct my essay "perfect society", thank all
Replies: 2
Views: 1993

Re: Help me correct my essay "perfect society", thank all

Ideal society or ideal life is a dream of many people for centuries. Arguments have come up among people regarding what is the most important factor for a perfect society. (Some say it’s gender equality, some say it’s human right) [weird] . (But if I had to choose the one, most desirable element of ...
by andytruong1202
Mon Mar 10, 2014 10:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my essay & benchmark it with band 9. Thank you
Replies: 0
Views: 543

Please check my essay & benchmark it with band 9. Thank you

Please grade my essay and suggest some improvements. I would greatly appreciate it Task-2: some parents believe that it is good for children to spend time on watching TV and computer games; but other parents believe that they should spend time on doing something else such as reading books. Agree or ...
by andytruong1202
Mon Mar 10, 2014 9:55 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: Bahrain General writing questions (seen 18 January 2014)
Replies: 6
Views: 3801

Re: Bahrain General writing questions (seen 18 January 2014)

Please grade my essay and suggest some improvements. I would greatly appreciate it Task-2: some parents believe that it is good for children to spend time on watching TV and computer games; but other parents believe that they should spend time on doing something else such as reading books. Agree or ...
by andytruong1202
Sun Mar 09, 2014 1:41 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Speaking study partner band 7
Replies: 5
Views: 1568

Re: Speaking study partner band 7

hi,

I once got band 7 in Speaking, I'm looking for someone to practice with. Please add me if you're interested. My Skype ID is andytruong1202