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by andytruong1202
Sat Apr 05, 2014 12:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: extend human life, <interesting topic task 2 >
Replies: 3
Views: 915

Re: extend human life, <interesting topic task 2 >

Science has been developing rapidly over the past few years and it becomes practical for scientists to find a way to make people live for 100 years, or maybe over 200 years. Some people believe this is a good thing while others believe this brings more issues. Discuss both of these views and give y...
by andytruong1202
Sat Apr 05, 2014 11:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay - Task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 1252

Re: Please evaluate my essay - Task 2

All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects? Obesity among people worldwide has surfaced as a serious threat to human health. It has increased at an alarming rate globally, especially during the past 40 years of ...
by andytruong1202
Sat Apr 05, 2014 10:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic on advertising. Please help me reduce the word count
Replies: 6
Views: 2125

Re: Topic on advertising. Please help me reduce the word cou

Hi andytruong1202, Thank you for your efforts to correct my essay. I received 7 on writing last time I took the test. I definitely have improved but I think this essay would not exced band 8. There are many sentences and words looking unatural according to a native speaker. Besides, I wrote way mor...
by andytruong1202
Sat Apr 05, 2014 5:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my essay
Replies: 12
Views: 2944

Re: please evaluate my essay

Hi Andy, Bro,thanks for your reply anyway, I heard that you scored band 7.5 on writing, mine was 7, aiming for band 8. do you have any strategy to follow specifically ? if any would you mind to share? thanks Durai Check out this thread http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=1015 quite ...
by andytruong1202
Sat Apr 05, 2014 5:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help to assess my essay.
Replies: 3
Views: 1197

Re: Please help to assess my essay.

Hi Allen,

I think you misunderstood the question. It asked you to agree to whether it's the responsibility of individuals to protect the environment/climate change or not/the responsibility of governments.
by andytruong1202
Sat Apr 05, 2014 5:02 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: What I did for my writing test
Replies: 5
Views: 1194

Re: What I did for my writing test

I regularly read articles on British & US news sites, besides HBR.org. My need, therefore, was to refresh the phrases and vocabulary that I had read earlier. Sitting with a dictionary to understand meanings and its correct usage helped. Rather than writing complex, I prefer to write in a way th...
by andytruong1202
Fri Apr 04, 2014 6:43 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my essay
Replies: 12
Views: 2944

Re: please evaluate my essay

durai wrote:Hi Andy,

I don't understand why you posted the above ,

please say in words because I cannot read people's mind.

Thanks
Durai
I just response to Fatima's comment.
by andytruong1202
Fri Apr 04, 2014 6:29 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: What I did for my writing test
Replies: 5
Views: 1194

Re: What I did for my writing test

Well, these were the things that I tried this time for the writing test (last attempt I had a 7.0), and they worked :) I wrote a couple of practice essays (but that was more to get some practice to write fast). But for a few more topics, I just wrote down the points in the quadrant format that I me...
by andytruong1202
Fri Apr 04, 2014 5:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my essay
Replies: 12
Views: 2944

Re: please evaluate my essay

Alright, sorry for that. perhaps because my screen resolution is too high, so everything written here appears too small to me. Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give you...
by andytruong1202
Fri Apr 04, 2014 11:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help to assess my essay.
Replies: 3
Views: 1197

Re: Please help to assess my essay.

Scientists and the mass media are presenting more evidences of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their way of lifestyle to prevent further damage. To what extent do you agree or disagree? -------------------------...
by andytruong1202
Fri Apr 04, 2014 10:57 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: What I did for my writing test
Replies: 5
Views: 1194

Re: What I did for my writing test

I scored an 8.0 on my recent Writing test and here are some strategies which I used - 1. Spent the first five minutes jotting down my points 2. Attempted the Task 2 first - (about 35 mins.) 3. For Task 2, I drew a quadrant View CounterView _____________________________________ | Points for | Points...
by andytruong1202
Fri Apr 04, 2014 10:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Sample essays
Replies: 6
Views: 1869

Re: Sample essays

Dear andytruong1202, I am now sending only one essay at a time. Please go through and rate my essay. Thanks! Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? Some people commit crimes in a desperate a...
by andytruong1202
Fri Apr 04, 2014 10:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: languages < anyone there>
Replies: 4
Views: 989

Re: languages < anyone there>

durai wrote:

another question , when you do corrections how can I mark with RED colour, I am trying but it's not working.


Durai

WRITE YOUR CORRECTIONS HERE
by andytruong1202
Fri Apr 04, 2014 10:00 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: languages < anyone there>
Replies: 4
Views: 989

Re: languages < anyone there>

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by andytruong1202
Fri Apr 04, 2014 8:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my essay
Replies: 12
Views: 2944

Re: please evaluate my essay

Alright, sorry for that. perhaps because my screen resolution is too high, so everything written here appears too small to me. Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give you...
by andytruong1202
Fri Apr 04, 2014 4:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls evaluate my essay!! thank you (Task2)
Replies: 3
Views: 980

Re: pls evaluate my essay!! thank you (Task2)

thank you! i just want to ask how i can make a good example. i often have a problem of making example. if i write down like as this, then is it better? " For example, children can learn more vocabulary by reading books " yes, this is fine. and also for the last sentence of first paragraph...
by andytruong1202
Fri Apr 04, 2014 4:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Evaluate my task 2 please
Replies: 11
Views: 4519

Re: Evaluate my task 2 please

chadny013 wrote:Thanks for correcting me. Can u tell me how much i can get if i write this way.
5.5 - 6 i guess
by andytruong1202
Thu Apr 03, 2014 5:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Sample essays
Replies: 6
Views: 1869

Re: Sample essays

One at a time bro
by andytruong1202
Thu Apr 03, 2014 5:38 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Topic on advertising. Please help me reduce the word count
Replies: 6
Views: 2125

Re: Topic on advertising. Please help me reduce the word cou

Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Advertising dominates the world we live today. Adverts are on TV, on the Intern...
by andytruong1202
Thu Apr 03, 2014 5:12 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: task 2 < anyone there?>
Replies: 4
Views: 976

Re: task 2 < anyone there?>

Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have a great role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just good as women in parenting. To what extent do you agree? -------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by andytruong1202
Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:25 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help task 1 complain letter
Replies: 2
Views: 940

Re: pls help task 1 complain letter

You had a meal at a restaurant. You are not happy with the service. Write to the manager to complain about it. Give details about the problems and request some compensation or refund. Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention the unprofessional service of one of your staff members – J...
by andytruong1202
Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my essay
Replies: 12
Views: 2944

Re: please evaluate my essay

Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion. A certain relationship can be seen when looking at modern lifestyles and people tendency to rely more or less on eac...
by andytruong1202
Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: hi pls grade my essay, my exam is on 5th april!
Replies: 17
Views: 3630

Re: hi pls grade my essay, my exam is on 5th april!

topic: Every year languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if tjere are fewer languages in the world. Language is the main form in many cultures in which its value and richness are appreciated . Many countries and cities have their own language s ,...
by andytruong1202
Thu Apr 03, 2014 3:32 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Evaluate my letter
Replies: 4
Views: 1117

Re: Evaluate my letter

You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to a English speaking friend. In your letter. * explain why you changed jobs * describe your new job * tell him/her your other news Dear Samruddhi, I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to share with you that I have...
by andytruong1202
Thu Apr 03, 2014 3:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Evaluate my task 2 please
Replies: 11
Views: 4519

Re: Evaluate my task 2 please

Topic : The best way for government to solve problem of traffic congestion in cities to provide free public transport 24 hours a day 7 days a week. What extent do you agree and disagree with this statement? Traffic congestion is the most severe problem in this world. This is very apparent especiall...