Hi I saw a lot of words used unnecessarily to make the essay lengthy. Try to reduce it and use that for another sentence with good reasoning. for eg: To begin with, nothing can alter the fact that those who support the statement above should have all their arguments justified. - this sentence seems ...
Hi Kindergarten - not "garden" btw, kindergarten doesn't come under primary school. isn't it? The inception of learning foreign language during the period of kindergarden (kindergarten) is advantage (coma) because the young children pickup language much more easily than teenagers (adults)....
Hi I never did re checking. My opinion in this case is, I have heard of 0.5 mark had been given for rechecking in writing and speaking modules, but 1.0 point seems to be difficult to obtain. However, If you are confident that you wrote it to the level, go ahead. One point to keep in mind, the output...
Hi Let me clear my position on this written essay: Introduction & conclusion is very nicely organized. however, i think the introduction you made a little complicated. Make simple sentences, 2 0r 3; Max 4 sentences are best. The arguments for & against are well written. But the idea is not c...
Hi friends, I am successful in my fourth attempt! My scores are : Listening: 8.0 Reading: 7.0 Writing: 7.5 Speaking: 8.5 Overall: 8.0 Thanks a lot my dear Ryan ! You are a great teacher available in the internet IELTS community! It is your best services that led me to cross the barricade. Also, than...
Culture to culture, it is different that the way children are brought up. In some cultures, such as in India, youngsters have to adhere to the strict rules of behavior, whereas in many others they have full freedom. It is believed that both these cultures have its own positives which will be discuss...
Obviously for a person who speaks and writes a lot in English English movies are very helpful. But I am not sure how much it is possible for a relatively new student to absorb from English movies in little time, for eg. in a month or two.
I hope you are well (doing good) . It has been a while when (since) I wrote to you last time. I am writing you to invite on the occasion of my son’s first Birthday celebration. (missing connection to this sentence) As you know, [<< comma ? "may know that" ] my wife and I had (have) been p...
yes, I understand; but this letter is kind/type of semi-formal. Therefore, you could use "sincerely" Since this is a semiformal letter, in the salutation you could use, Dear editor / Dear Mr. xyz Aa far as I know, a letter to the known person such as librarian, doctor, editor, your manager...
DEAR ALL, Please go through my essay and leave behind your valuable comments and suggestions.. Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others,however,say that this would have a little effect on public health and that other measures...
You have read an article in a newspaper that contains incorrect information about your town/city. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper to inform them about the mistake. In your letter - Describe your knowledge of the city. - Explain what information was incorrect in your opinion. - Suggest...
please go through my essay on same topic and show if any mistakes please. In the era of technological innovations, the use of computer is ubiquitous. When knowledge of computer is essential to get any employment, some people believe that individuals without computer skills are disadvantaged in seve...
Some say that it is more important for employers to consider academic qualifications rather than personal life experience and values when hiring an employee. Do you agree or disagree? What are positive and negative aspects of the issue? In modern era, a confident, smart and expert employee is the b...