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by ieltslearner
Fri Jul 15, 2016 4:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Dear David - Please view task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 2241

Re: Dear David - Please view task 2

Hi David and Everyone else, I have recently taken the IELTS exam for the third time and achieved the desired Band 8 score for writing. I got band 7 previously in 2 attempts. I would like to thank this forum, the organizers, Ryan, the teachers including David for all their help rendered. I did a lot ...
by ieltslearner
Sun Mar 27, 2016 2:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Dear David - Please view task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 2241

Re: Dear David - Please view task 2

Thanks David. I will continue to work hard to improve :)
by ieltslearner
Tue Mar 22, 2016 4:15 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Dear David - Please view task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 2241

Dear David - Please view task 2

Hello David, Thank you for all your help in assessing the essays. I have taken 2 IELTS tests previously, but my band score was 7 in Writing. I'm aiming for Band 8. Please advise if you feel there are areas I can improve upon to improve my band score. Almost everyone agrees that we should be training...
by ieltslearner
Mon Mar 21, 2016 8:04 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi David - Please evaluate my task 2 writing
Replies: 1
Views: 609

Hi David - Please evaluate my task 2 writing

Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? In today’s modern world, companies have multiplied their advertising resources, enticing the ge...
by ieltslearner
Mon Mar 21, 2016 5:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please review writing task 2 - Houses vs Apartments
Replies: 1
Views: 762

Please review writing task 2 - Houses vs Apartments

Some people prefer to live in a house, while others think that there are more advantages living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house rather than in an apartment? Opinion is divided whether living in a house compared to an apartment is more beneficial. I...
by ieltslearner
Sun Mar 20, 2016 9:15 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi David - Please assess my writing task 2 - overpopulation
Replies: 3
Views: 1015

Re: Hi David - Please assess my writing task 2 - overpopulation

Hi David, Appreciate your response :) In point 1) I did not mention traffic problem but congestion in buses and trains in places such as Singapore or Thailand during peak hours. Wouldn't that be a reasonable cause of overpopulation? Also please advise what you mean when you say the grammar is 'suspi...
by ieltslearner
Sat Mar 19, 2016 3:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi David - Please assess my writing task 2 - overpopulation
Replies: 3
Views: 1015

Hi David - Please assess my writing task 2 - overpopulation

One of the most pressing problems facing the world today is overpopulation. What policies do you believe governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem? The constant rise in world population is a growing cause of concern for international regimes in current times. There ...
by ieltslearner
Thu Mar 17, 2016 6:58 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please review writing task 2 - Health care decision by parents
Replies: 2
Views: 744

Please review writing task 2 - Health care decision by parents

Some people say that parents should decide on what kind of medical care their children should receive, while others believe that this is the state’s responsibility Discuss both views and give your opinion Thoughts are divided if parents should be responsible for the type of health care that is to b...
by ieltslearner
Thu Mar 17, 2016 6:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess writing task 2 - Percentage of overweight children
Replies: 3
Views: 3482

Re: Please assess writing task 2 - Percentage of overweight children

Thanks David.

Really appreciate the time and effort you put in for the students.

With gratitude and appreciation. Thank you.
by ieltslearner
Wed Mar 16, 2016 9:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess writing task 2 - Percentage of overweight children
Replies: 3
Views: 3482

Please assess writing task 2 - Percentage of overweight children

The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. The percentage of obese children has increased by nearly 20% in the last decade in western countries. There are two main reasons for t...
by ieltslearner
Fri Mar 11, 2016 2:33 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay about having children late - Writing Task 2 - Please assess
Replies: 2
Views: 4034

Essay about having children late - Writing Task 2 - Please assess

Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society? There is a growing trend where couples are deciding to have children at a later stage in their married life compared to the tr...
by ieltslearner
Fri Mar 11, 2016 2:21 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my essay - writing task 2
Replies: 4
Views: 1048

Re: Please assess my essay - writing task 2

Thanks Roderick. Appreciate that. Would you be able to suggest some vocabulary that could be used in this essay?
by ieltslearner
Thu Mar 10, 2016 2:50 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please review Task 2 for GT and rate.
Replies: 1
Views: 632

Re: Please review Task 2 for GT and rate.

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement? ********************************************************************* Art is a form of expression which ...
by ieltslearner
Wed Mar 09, 2016 6:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my essay - writing task 2
Replies: 4
Views: 1048

Re: Please assess my essay - writing task 2

Not sure what that means @Gin
by ieltslearner
Tue Mar 08, 2016 1:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my essay - writing task 2
Replies: 4
Views: 1048

Please assess my essay - writing task 2

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement? There is a perception that state investment in the area of arts and culture, such as music and theater, ...
by ieltslearner
Sun Mar 06, 2016 8:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Sir please assess my essay - Writing task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 635

Sir please assess my essay - Writing task 2

Hello Everyone and all the respectable invigilators on here...I'm new to this forum and would like to get my writing assessed. Thank you in advance. Question: In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and...