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please evaluate my essay. I'm mimicking Ryan's structure, and my target is band 7. Thanks Some people think cars should be banned in city centers, especially in large cities. Do you agree or disagree? ------- In today’s world, the number of motor vehicles is swelling rapidly, and this trend causes ...

all were General Training tests. 1. 2013-8-17 L6 R6.5 W6 S7 2.2013-9-21 L7.5 R7.5 W6->reassessed to 6.5 S6.5 3.2014-2-15 L7 R7 W6 S6.5 I see, so your L+R is quite stable, whilst your W+6 are fairly close - weakest is W. Yes, so would you please take a look at my essay? http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/v...

all were General Training tests.

1. 2013-8-17 L6 R6.5 W6 S7
2.2013-9-21 L7.5 R7.5 W6->reassessed to 6.5 S6.5
3.2014-2-15 L7 R7 W6 S6.5

Hi everyone, This is Quentin from China, and I need band 7 for EACH section in IELTS. I had 3 attempts previously but never got band 7 in writing. In my last exam, I applied Ryan's structure in essay 2, but unfortunately I made a lot of grammar mistakes and relatively the topic was a little bit diff...

Hi,
This essay is following Ryan's suggestion and it looks good.
My only suggestion is that you can use live and specific example in your third paragraph, just like what you did in 2nd paragraph.

May I ask you did you attempt exam before? What's the score in writing part?

Thanks

Hi, First, I think you can add one more paragraph and some live and specific examples to support your idea, which will help you to fully develop your thesis. Second, I suggest you to use short, clear, simple sentence to express your topic sentence. Moreover, this question is asking you to support th...

Hi,

On the one hand, it is understandable that learning another language can be a burden for younger children.
This topic sentence does not focus on primary or secondary school. This may loose your mark on TR.

"impact to" should be "impact on" Is it better to use "Firstly" instead of "on the other hand"? the rapid expansion of international tourism has led to employment opportunities that benefits the economy of the host country what the "that" here refers...

please evaluate my essay. I'm mimicking Ryan's structure, and my target is band 7. Thanks Some people think cars should be banned in city centers, especially in large cities. Do you agree or disagree? ------- In today’s world, the number of motor vehicles is swelling rapidly, and this trend causes n...