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by Dr.Khurram
Fri Aug 19, 2016 5:49 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou
Replies: 2
Views: 1172

Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou

The overuse of natural resources causes an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, government should discourage people the overuse of these resources. One p...
by Dr.Khurram
Sat Jul 30, 2016 6:56 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou
Replies: 2
Views: 1083

Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou

Some people think it is better to give donations to local charitable organizations, while others choose to give to national or international bodies. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience. In t...
by Dr.Khurram
Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou
Replies: 2
Views: 1189

Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit In this contemporary society, the main aim of many enterprises is to swell their business, and in doing so they employ every method to meet their targets. Many commentators are of the view ...
by Dr.Khurram
Fri Jul 01, 2016 6:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my essay. I want to achieve band 8 in writing. Thank-you.
Replies: 2
Views: 1234

Kindly assess my essay. I want to achieve band 8 in writing. Thank-you.

These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? These days many fathers prefer to look after their children by staying at home instead of doing jobs and fem...
by Dr.Khurram
Fri May 13, 2016 12:08 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my essay. I want to achieve band 8 in writing. My exam is on 4th June.
Replies: 1
Views: 1260

Kindly assess my essay. I want to achieve band 8 in writing. My exam is on 4th June.

Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? No...
by Dr.Khurram
Tue May 10, 2016 4:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou
Replies: 2
Views: 1117

Re: Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou

Thank You so much, David for your useful input.
by Dr.Khurram
Mon May 09, 2016 6:47 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my essay. I want to achieve band 8 in writing. Thank-you.
Replies: 4
Views: 1516

Kindly assess my essay. I want to achieve band 8 in writing. Thank-you.

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. These days it is common for pupils to take a year off after completion of their h...
by Dr.Khurram
Wed May 04, 2016 1:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou
Replies: 2
Views: 1117

Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou

Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children. What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge ...
by Dr.Khurram
Thu Apr 28, 2016 12:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou
Replies: 3
Views: 1118

Re: Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou

Thank you so much David. You are doing such a wonderful job.
by Dr.Khurram
Wed Apr 27, 2016 11:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou
Replies: 3
Views: 1118

Kindly assess my writing. Thankyou

Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? What is your view point on this issue? In many metropolitan cities around the globe, there is a common practice of demolishing old buildings of historical significance and replacing them...
by Dr.Khurram
Fri Apr 22, 2016 7:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing.
Replies: 1
Views: 715

Kindly assess my writing.

The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree? In the last few decades, nuclear technology has become center of attention, all over the world. Many ...
by Dr.Khurram
Fri Apr 15, 2016 8:04 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing. My target is Band 8.
Replies: 1
Views: 725

Kindly assess my writing. My target is Band 8.

People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint? In this contemporary society, people have versatile attitudes toward their job...
by Dr.Khurram
Sat Apr 09, 2016 9:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Some people think that cities are the best places to live
Replies: 2
Views: 5863

Some people think that cities are the best places to live

Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the country side. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. In the last few decades...
by Dr.Khurram
Sat Apr 02, 2016 3:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing. My target is band 8 in writing.
Replies: 2
Views: 1899

Kindly assess my writing. My target is band 8 in writing.

By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Punishment is the method which is employed by the society to deter crimes. However s...
by Dr.Khurram
Mon Mar 21, 2016 12:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing. My target is 8 bands.
Replies: 3
Views: 2545

Re: Kindly assess my writing. My target is 8 bands.

Thank you David for pointing out all these mistakes. Your input is significantly helping me to improve my writing.
by Dr.Khurram
Sun Mar 20, 2016 3:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing. My target is 8 bands.
Replies: 3
Views: 2545

Kindly assess my writing. My target is 8 bands.

Some Governments say how many children a family can have in their country should be strictly controlled. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way? Do you agree or disagree? Give reaso...
by Dr.Khurram
Fri Feb 26, 2016 8:59 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing.My target is band 7.5 in writing section.
Replies: 1
Views: 611

Kindly assess my writing.My target is band 7.5 in writing section.

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if...
by Dr.Khurram
Thu Feb 25, 2016 1:36 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing task 2.My target is 7.5 bands in writing.Please highlight important mistakes.
Replies: 2
Views: 852

Re: Kindly assess my writing task 2.My target is 7.5 bands in writing.Please highlight important mistakes.

Thank you so much David. Do you think, this is 7.5 band essay because previously i scored only band 6 in writing and i am very disappointed with my performance.
by Dr.Khurram
Thu Feb 25, 2016 1:31 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing task 2.My aim is 7.5 band in writing.
Replies: 1
Views: 678

Kindly assess my writing task 2.My aim is 7.5 band in writing.

Some people say that television is a very useful tool when it comes to education. Others argue that television is a much overused, ineffective teacher. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool. Give reasons for your answer and includ...
by Dr.Khurram
Sun Feb 21, 2016 2:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing task 2.My target is 7.5 bands in writing.Please highlight important mistakes.
Replies: 2
Views: 852

Kindly assess my writing task 2.My target is 7.5 bands in writing.Please highlight important mistakes.

We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits? In this 21st century, comput...
by Dr.Khurram
Fri Feb 19, 2016 12:49 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly assess my writing.My target is band 7.5 in writing.Please also mention important mistakes.
Replies: 1
Views: 727

Kindly assess my writing.My target is band 7.5 in writing.Please also mention important mistakes.

The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? In today’s world science and technology have profound effects on our life. In this century, there will be noteworthy developments in each and every sector of life, that will produce both positive and negative influenc...
by Dr.Khurram
Sun Jan 17, 2016 9:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I have my ielts on 23 January.My aim is 7.5.Kindly access my writing.
Replies: 1
Views: 633

I have my ielts on 23 January.My aim is 7.5.Kindly access my writing.

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. "Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. ...
by Dr.Khurram
Fri Jan 08, 2016 1:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I have my ielts exam on 23 January.My aim is 7.5 band in writing.Kindly assess my writing.
Replies: 1
Views: 772

I have my ielts exam on 23 January.My aim is 7.5 band in writing.Kindly assess my writing.

Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is obvious fact financial aspects are very significant part of daily life. Financial education not only help children in better understanding of financial system...
by Dr.Khurram
Thu Jan 07, 2016 1:30 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: This is my first post on any online forum. i have my Ielts exam on 23 January.My aim is 7.5 bands in writing.
Replies: 2
Views: 934

This is my first post on any online forum. i have my Ielts exam on 23 January.My aim is 7.5 bands in writing.

Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent you agree? Each year international sports events held through out the world.Through out the history it ca...