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Hello! I need 8.5 in writing. Please, clarify these issues: 1) Is it a must to use personal pronouns while stating my opinion? Will I get a lower score if I use learned phrases like that: 'It can reasonbly be argued that...?' 2) Will it be treated as misquoting if I change or shorten some of the idi...

Can you compare the given sentence and the task sentence with your own introduction yourself? Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job in their free time. vs In modern days, parents encourage their children to get part-time job in their spare time. What are the advantages...

The structure of your essay could be better. Have you ever seen good discursive essays? http://ieltsielts.com/model-response-to ... july-2014/

Your essay does not make any sense. Go to some IELTS courses before writing IELTS essays.

Too many mistakes. Just the first paragraph (the rest is nearly the same). In modern days, students believed to use computer too much. - grammar Adults believe that it can damage children's reading and writing skills. - repetition Teacher are told to stop using computer for lectures and teach with c...

I am talking about rinriera's essay. As for your essay, you might be punished for using exact percentage points, because these phrases would be treated as "memorised". I can add that your essay should be improved by adding missing commas and correcting your wording.

"good job! can you read mine?" - Are you kidding or something? The previous essay was rather weak.

It is less than 7.0. There are some bad mistakes.

I am not an examiner; however, were I to decide, I would give you 5.5, because you have made quite a number of grammar mistakes, your grammatical range is poor, while your vocabulary is good. If you had less mistakes, your grammatical range would let you have 6.0, because you have used several verba...

There are still a lot of mistakes left. It is all about your level of English. You should master English grammar to get rid of your mistakes.

You repeat the same mistakes in your essays (e.g."nowadays" with Present Perfect, wrong punctuation, etc.). There is one more problem; you might get a lower score for using memorised phrases like " since industrialization commenced in the UK" (you were not asked to discuss the si...

You are to discuss other people's opinions in the discursive essay, so you are not to provide examples from your own experience to illustrate their viewpoints in the body-part paragraphs. Study this model answer: http://ieltsielts.com/model-response-to ... july-2014/

Man, so many grammar mistakes! You should do something about it. And I see no point in writing 5 paragraphs in this very case, I would write only 4.

Nowadays, the number of home appliances sold in the world has increased dramatically. - It is better to use "Over the past several years" or "Recently" instead of "Nowadays" if you want to use Present Perfect further on. This trend could bring with it negative repercus...

I would do it in a different way; your own vewpoint could be given in the last paragraph, while the 2 opposite other people's opinions could be discussed - without referring to examples from your own experience - in the body-part paragraphs. It would make your discursive essay better.

I would reduce the number of personal pronuns considerably. It is also advisable to avoid questions in the essay itself. Your style is inappropriate: sometimes too humble, sometimes too colloquial.

Some commas are missing. Unnecessary repetitions should be avoided.

Let me underline just some of your mistakes: Nowadays, it is believed that all people should own a debit or credit card along with them and they prefer to bring the cards along with them instead of carrying notes. In this essay, I am party agree about this statement. First of all, I think that it is...

Let me underline some of your mistakes: Recently, a lot of people are leaving their home countries and relocating in foreign countries to continue studying or working abroad, this tend to appear in adult age-group . Personally, I support the idea for traveling to enhance the quality of live and the ...

Man, so many mistakes! I would like to underline some of your mistakes and inaccuracies: In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly in various fronts. However , at the same time, many issues have arisen, a serious one of them is producing abundant of garbage . This is challenge ...

Thank you! I will do my best.

Thank you! Let it be "mainly increasing" instead of "ever-increasing". Last time I had 8.0 for Writing, while now I am striving for 8.5 or 9.0.

Can you assess my writing, please? The task: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. The pictures are here (sor...