Hi ryan,
Thank you very much for your positive comments. I feel glad to see a band 7 score from you. I will surely take note of the grammar issues in my essay..
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- Fri Sep 06, 2013 11:24 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: essay task 2 - need feedback and possible band score
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- Tue Sep 03, 2013 8:22 am
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- Topic: essay task 2 - need feedback and possible band score
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essay task 2 - need feedback and possible band score
Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance? It is undeniable that computers are very useful technological tools in our modern society because computers have many ...
- Tue Aug 20, 2013 5:46 am
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- Topic: Essay contest! Question seen in India 27 July 2013
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Re: Essay contest! Question seen in India 27 July 2013
It is true that tourism can bring both positive and negative impacts. While many countries benefit from the growing tourism industry, the accompanying damaging effects of tourism should not be neglected. This essay will present the harmful effects of tourism and give possible ways to reduce it. In m...