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Durai - the question said 'One of your friends invited you for a meal', not 'One of your friends has invited you for a meal'. It's a small difference, but the lack of the word 'has' means that the question is asking about a past event rather than a future one.

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Hi paperheart, thanks for posting. I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- One of your friends invited you for a meal with his/her family in their home. Write a letter to your friend and say: - Thank them and tell what you have enj...

Hi inaveed, thanks for posting. I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete b...

Hi pieter harms, thanks for posting. I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- In some cultures, children are expected to follow very strict rules of behaviour. In other cultures, children are allowed to do almost anything they want....

Hi Mark, thanks for posting. I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- The number of men in full-time education rose steadily between 1970 and 1990 . (<-- There was nothing wrong with your sentence, but I felt it needed to sound more...

Hi swetam, thanks for posting. I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- A friend has agreed to look after your house & pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Give contact details for when...

Hi rairaichan0323, thanks for posting. I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- You have recently bought a toy over the internet. When it was delivered you have found some problems with it. Write a letter to the toy company manager ...

Hi bond_bhai, thanks for posting. I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed th...

Hi imrahul, thanks for posting. I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We s...

Hi Aylan, thanks for posting. I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- There are myriad employees of different ages and experience (<-- When referring to familiarity gained through prior events, such as previous jobs, it’s always ‘e...

Hi birpal, thanks for posting. I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- In the distant future technology will completely replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Technology is increasing rapid...

Hi Feyer, thanks for posting. Sorry it took so long for someone to get back to you! I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- As can be seen from the pie chart, there are three principal reasons for farmland to become increasingly fr...

Hi inaveed, thanks for posting. Sorry it took so long for someone to get back to you! I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do ...

Hi mmsanchezramirez, thanks for posting. Sorry it took so long for someone to get back to you! I’ve read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they sho...

Hi Martin, thanks for posting. I've read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straigh...

Hi maria.sultana, thanks for posting. I've read your work, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- In some societies, it is considered totally the responsibility of women to bring up their children without the help of their partner. (<-- I removed some...

Hi fahey847, thanks for posting. I have read your essay, and I have some comments and advice for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- In recent years , having a convenient way to get around (<-- This was worded awkwardly so I rephrased it.) is of vital importance. There are ...

Hi Lateef, thanks for posting. I have read through your letter, and I have a few tips for you. Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- Hi Brandy, How are you doing? I am really grateful that you have agreed to come and stay at my house while I am away (<-- It’s very important to cla...

Hi Anna, thanks for posting. I've gone through your Task 1 response, and I think you've done well. No need to panic! Corrections are in red , and comments are in blue . ---- These charts illustrate the various reasons why (<-- ‘why’ is more concise.) adults have chosen to study , (<-- ‘persuade’ doe...