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- Thu Feb 20, 2014 10:36 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE REVIEW THIS LETTER
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Re: PLEASE REVIEW THIS LETTER
Hi sanskar, Corrections are in red . Comments are in blue . Dear George, I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit s . I am writing to invite you to come and visit me at my new place. My move was necessitated by a number of reasons. Firstly, as you are well aware, the lease for the apar...
- Thu Feb 20, 2014 10:23 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Urgent(Test on 15.2.) - Essay Task2 Pls comment
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Re: Urgent(Test on 15.2.) - Essay Task2 Pls comment
Hi Stefan, Here are a couple of quick thoughts: Globalization is taking place all around us , (<--Avoid being so personal in your essay. You are expected to present an academic tone.) and its growth is also visible in the development of tourism. Since it has become easier and more affordable to trav...
- Thu Feb 20, 2014 8:30 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Need feedback on my letter
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- Views: 1191
Re: Need feedback on my letter
Hi saqibali,
Please type the letter out. I would be happy to give you feedback. The images you posted are difficult to read.
Thanks.
Please type the letter out. I would be happy to give you feedback. The images you posted are difficult to read.
Thanks.