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by Grammar Girl
Thu Feb 20, 2014 10:36 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: PLEASE REVIEW THIS LETTER
Replies: 1
Views: 988

Re: PLEASE REVIEW THIS LETTER

Hi sanskar, Corrections are in red . Comments are in blue . Dear George, I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit s . I am writing to invite you to come and visit me at my new place. My move was necessitated by a number of reasons. Firstly, as you are well aware, the lease for the apar...
by Grammar Girl
Thu Feb 20, 2014 10:23 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Urgent(Test on 15.2.) - Essay Task2 Pls comment
Replies: 1
Views: 1060

Re: Urgent(Test on 15.2.) - Essay Task2 Pls comment

Hi Stefan, Here are a couple of quick thoughts: Globalization is taking place all around us , (<--Avoid being so personal in your essay. You are expected to present an academic tone.) and its growth is also visible in the development of tourism. Since it has become easier and more affordable to trav...
by Grammar Girl
Thu Feb 20, 2014 8:30 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Need feedback on my letter
Replies: 4
Views: 1191

Re: Need feedback on my letter

Hi saqibali,

Please type the letter out. I would be happy to give you feedback. The images you posted are difficult to read.

Thanks.