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Thank you, David!
Your comments are very helpful for me, and I will try to use more different structures in my next writing

Hello, I would be glad to have anyone look at my text :) And I'm not sure about times to use in tasks with predictions and future. I use Future Perfect when talking about specific time (for example, BY 2050) and Future Simple when there is no specific time mentioned. Is this good enough or I should...

David.IELTS.Examiner wrote:Hi Polina,
Basically, a good report. You have included all the main points, but a couple of minor points are not mentioned, e.g. stones and reeds.
All the best,
David

I agree with this Thank you for your suggestion, David!

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Here are the picture: http://prntscr.com/9fetmg Given diagram represents the life cycle of salmon, one of the...

Hello, everybody! I will be grateful for every point of view about my essay :) Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? Museums are fairly considered as the part of national history an...

Hi Polina Try to make the introduction one sentence using paraphrases of the chart titles and question. The first bar graph demonstrates what UK graduate students, who did not start full-time work, did after study in 2008. The second bar graph illustrates the same information but for postgraduates ...

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Full task: http://prntscr.com/8k8zlf The first bar grap...

Hi Polina Be careful when you use 'former' and 'latter'. You have to mention at least two things before your can refer to them as former (first) and latter (last). In your introduction, just say 'first' and 'second'. Also, the emissions are caused by the energy use, not the other way round. Use 'co...

Dear Polina I haven't seen the exam question or the charts, but I'm not sure that you would talk about a correlation between the charts in the introduction. If you conclude that there is a correlation, put that at the end, but from your second body paragraph, it looks like there wasn’t one. In othe...

I lot from this essay are gathered from this forum, but I still worry about mistakes or wrong meaning... :? The first pie chart represents the percentage of different types of energy use in average Australian household. The second chart demonstrates the correlation in gas emissions, caused by energ...