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Overall good vocabulary and writing style! The line chart provides information about the trend of domestic access to four modern technological devices: CD player, mobile phone, internet and home computer in the United Kingdom over seven years from 1996 to 2003. In general, the four devices technolog...

The graphs illustrate information about amount of fuel, food, manufactured goods, and total exports in a country, over a five-year period between 2000 and 2005. Overall, what stands out from graph is that total exports rose considerably over the period in question. Manufactured goods exports went up...

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The diagram highlights the steps involved in making and distributing of tomato ketchup. There are 15 stages in the diagram, from picking tomatoes to eating ketchup with hamburger and fries. The first step is that the tomatoes are picked up by farmer and put in basket. After that they are sorted out ...

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I would appreciate if you could let me know about my grammar mistakes.

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The graph compares number of people employed in three different sectors of the economy, in the UK, over a 10-year period, between 2000 and 2010. Overall, public sector and self-employed employers increased over the period in question, while employment rate in private sector dropped steadily througho...

The graph shows the information about expected number of people who will study English, Spanish, and Mandarin languages, over a decade between 2020 and 2030. Overall, all three languages’ learners will increase over the period in question. In addition, English will be the most popular language to le...

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I think 'accelerated sharply' will be the correct word to use in final sentence.

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Overall, it can be seen that there is an upward trend on the rate of 60 years and above age people in both countries whereas under 14 years old population of both countries followed downward trend.

The pie charts reveal the statistical information of habitants of 3 age groups in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and their estimate for 2050. According to the data, Yemen consisted of 46.3% of 15 to 59 years old population in 2000 and it is estimated that this figure will swell to 57.3% in 2050. 50.1% Yeme...

The graph shows the total number of minutes used for Local – fixed line, National and International – fixed line and mobile phone calls in the UK between 1995 and 2002. It can be clearly seen that International and national – fixed line and mobile phone calling trend increased throughout the period ...

Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your op...

Should following question answer in Argument Essay style or Discussion Essay style?

"Nowadays air travel is cheaper than in the past. Is this a positive or a negative development? Discuss and give your own opinion."

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your ...

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It is generally believe that some people born with certain talent, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. For every profession,...