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Kindly evaluate my essay and give potential band score-: I have an exam on 21st November so please give some suggestions to improve. More and more people these days work harder for longer hours and have no time for family life and friends. What are the causes in your opinion? How is it affecting fam...

Hi Delvy,

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You're most welcome buddy!!

Hello ____, Thank you for your feedback. I don't think Ryan advises to write argument for a discussion essay. Moreover, how can one write an argument essay when the question clear says to discuss both the views and then give your opinion? I agree with you npr.ielts7. Question clearly states to disc...

I hope you are well. It has been a while when I wrote to you last time. I am writing you to invite on the occasion of my son’s first Birthday celebration. As you know, my wife and I had been planning for our son’s first birthday celebration since long, and finally last week, we decided to organize i...

Yes. I agree with you.
Agree or disagree type questions are easier and straight forward. Also, your way to write essays for those questions is quite simpler.

Thanks for your feedback again!

Thank you Ryan for your valuable feedback.

I have been following your videos for quite long time.

Just one quick question that I wrote a discussion essay for this so do you think it is good to go? Or you think that Argument style essay would be a better option?

Thanks for your comments. I'll work on putting more uncommon words.

One more... Some say that it is more important for employers to consider academic qualifications rather than personal life experience and values when hiring an employee. Do you agree or disagree? What are positive and negative aspects of the issue? There is no doubt in saying that education and othe...

Nowadays mobile phones can be found everywhere in this world. Is it a positive or a negative development? The mobile phone is the most popular gadget in today’s world. It has revolutionized the way people communicate with each other. It is indeed a positive development for the users and the society....

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Dear Mr Ryan, Kindly assess my letter and provide feedback. You have been sent abroad for a 3-month training which is about to finish. Write a letter to your company manager asking their permission to stay longer and say - How does the training benefit you? - Why do you need to stay longer? - Inform...

Hello Ryan,

Could you please evaluate my essay.

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Hello, Please assess the essay, provide your feedback and potential band score. Some people prefer to live in a house, while others think that there are more advantages living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house rather than in an apartment? Choosing acc...

Thank you Samat and Ryan for your valuable feedback. I want to achieve Band 7 so I believe I need big improvement in my writing skills. Ryan- I have been watching your videos for last 15 days and they are awesome. I will write more essays and letters and post here. Also, What are your suggestions fo...

Can someone please check my letter and provide feedback and potential band score-: You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter: - Explain why you are writing - Explain why you have decided to leave the company - Tell your e...