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by jacklincicily
Sun Aug 09, 2015 5:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: You have 72 hours to enter this essay writing contest!
Replies: 93
Views: 41773

Re: You have 72 hours to enter this essay writing contest!

In many parts of the world,children are taught to follow strict rules of behavior both at home and school as opposed to that some coutries, where children are free to behave and do as they wish. However, in my opinion I believe that children should follow certain rules of behavior and at the same ti...
by jacklincicily
Sun Aug 09, 2015 4:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate my writing task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 905

Re: please evaluate my writing task 2

I can hardly give you a band score of 6 because of the reasons below. 1.Task response is poor in your essay 2.You cannot start your body paragraph with so. 3.Although u have written some logical points you have to connect it with your topic sentence with relevant examples. For example, u have writte...
by jacklincicily
Sun Aug 09, 2015 4:00 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: My task 2 will get how many bands ? plz look and write score for me!
Replies: 2
Views: 572

Re: My task 2 will get how many bands ? plz look and write score for me!

helo Alia,i would definitely give you overall 7 band for your essay.However,i could find a few grammatical errors and repetition of some words such as ''as a result'',But it is reall gud to use variety of cohesive devices and strong topic sentence in the beginning of your bodyparagraph.continue work...
by jacklincicily
Sun Aug 09, 2015 3:44 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: helo
Replies: 0
Views: 1752

helo

hi my name Jacklin .I am from India ,trying to achieve 7 band in all modules this time .please help and I can do the same