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- Sun Apr 24, 2016 2:52 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing Task 2 - Punishment for each crime
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1566
Re: Writing Task 2 - Punishment for each crime
I really like your work, it is an example of a good essay really. I wish I could write good essays too.. When I have to do it I always use the help of a research paper writing service for some proofreading and advanced check. Maybe you can give me some tips on writing which will help me? Hello Jcas...
- Fri Apr 15, 2016 1:05 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 1 - Fish and Meat Consumption
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1448
Re: Writing task 1 - Fish and Meat Consumption
Hello David,David.IELTS.Examiner wrote:Hello!
Overall, very good. Organisation is clear and you have included details and the general trends. Vocabulary and grammar are good in both range and accuracy.
Well done!
David
Thank you for your feedback.
Have a great day,
Ecro
- Fri Apr 15, 2016 1:04 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing Task 2 - Punishment for each crime
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1566
Re: Writing Task 2 - Punishment for each crime
Hello! I like your mathematical proposal! When it comes to the slow process, I think this is not really due to the time spent on deciding a sentence, but the time presenting a case. Both grammar and vocabulary are good and organisation is clear. Well done! David Hello David, Thank you for your feed...
- Sat Apr 09, 2016 7:45 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 1 - Goods transported in the UK
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1574
Re: Writing task 1 - Goods transported in the UK
Hello David, I'll work on including figures and trends! Thank you! Have a great day, Ecro Hello! The report is very general and sometimes misses out the trends for shorter periods. You should also include some more figures in the answer. However, grammar and vocabulary are good! All the best, David
- Sat Apr 09, 2016 7:42 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 2 - Health and Fitness
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1963
Re: Writing task 2 - Health and Fitness
Hello David, Thank you for reviewing my writing task! Have a great day, Ecro Hello! Are people really more worried about their digital presence than their real presence? Overall, this seems like a reasonable essay, but it does miss out one important fact - that nowadays health and fitness are all ar...
- Sat Apr 09, 2016 7:41 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Speaking about a person I remember from my childhood
- Replies: 2
- Views: 10675
Re: Speaking about a person I remember from my childhood
Hello David, Thank you for your guidelines, I'll definitely work on that! Have a great day, Ecro Hello! Part 1 - Answers are generally quite short without details, examples in particular. Which channels put out high quality content, for instance? Part 2 - Again, few details. How old was John? How ta...
- Sat Apr 09, 2016 6:24 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing Task 2 - Punishment for each crime
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1566
Writing Task 2 - Punishment for each crime
Hello, Here is my Writing task 2: It's believed that there should be a specific punishment for each type of crime. Some, however, think that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motives for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding what the punishment should be. On...
- Sat Apr 09, 2016 6:22 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 1 - Fish and Meat Consumption
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1448
Writing task 1 - Fish and Meat Consumption
Hello, Here is a picture from the graph that was given in Writing task 1: http://prikachi.com/images.php?images/158/8741158I.png The graph gives information about the consumption of some kinds of meat and fish in a European country from 1979 to 2004. In 1979, chicken consumption was 3rd with a littl...
- Thu Apr 07, 2016 9:58 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Speaking about an idea I had at school
- Replies: 1
- Views: 13039
Speaking about an idea I had at school
Hello, Here is my speaking and the question that were given in part 2 and 3. Describe an idea you had for improving something at work or college. You should say: -When and where you had your idea -What your idea was -Who you told about your idea and explain why you thought your idea would make an im...
- Fri Mar 04, 2016 3:45 pm
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Speaking about a person I remember from my childhood
- Replies: 2
- Views: 10675
Speaking about a person I remember from my childhood
Part 2:
Describe a friend of your family who you remember from your childhood
You should say:
who the person was
how your family knew this person
how often this person visited your family and why you remember this person.
Thank you for listening to my Speaking.
Have a great day,
Ecro
Describe a friend of your family who you remember from your childhood
You should say:
who the person was
how your family knew this person
how often this person visited your family and why you remember this person.
Thank you for listening to my Speaking.
Have a great day,
Ecro
- Fri Mar 04, 2016 6:32 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 2 - Health and Fitness
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1963
Writing task 2 - Health and Fitness
It is generally believed that the average weight of people is going up, while the fitness and health are going down. Some think that the way to solve that problem is to make people aware of their obesity. Others, however, think that they should motivate them to change their lives completely. On the ...
- Fri Mar 04, 2016 6:26 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 1 - Cement and concrete production
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2812
Re: Writing task 1 - Cement and concrete production
The diagrams provide information about the equipment and stages used to create cement, and how it's used in concrete production. During cement production, limestone and clay are crushed in a crusher in order to produce powder. The powder then travels through a mixer and a rotating heater. When the ...
- Fri Mar 04, 2016 6:25 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 1 - Cement and concrete production
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2812
Re: Writing task 1 - Cement and concrete production
Thank you for your advice. I'll definitely work on that.David.IELTS.Examiner wrote:Overall, a good report. To make it better, spend a little more time on describing the first process, using connectives to link the different stages.
All the best,
David
Have a great day,
Ecro
- Fri Mar 04, 2016 6:22 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 1 - Goods transported in the UK
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1574
Writing task 1 - Goods transported in the UK
Here is the graph: http://prikachi.com/images.php?images/169/8670169G.png The graph provides information about the goods transported in the UK by four different types of transport between 1974 and 2002. The most popular method by which goods were transported was road. In 1974 more than 70 billion to...
- Thu Feb 04, 2016 8:45 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Speaking about a meeting
- Replies: 4
- Views: 16540
Re: Speaking about a meeting
In this recording, I noticed a stronger use of vocabulary: classify, categories, catch up, tedious. You were able to use higher-level words as well as slang phrasal verbs. This indicates a high level of comfort with speaking in English. On the other hand, you said the word “important” several times...
- Tue Feb 02, 2016 8:41 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Speaking about a meeting
- Replies: 4
- Views: 16540
Speaking about a meeting
Part 2 - Describe a meeting you remember going to at work, college or school. -When and where the meeting was held -who was at the meeting -what the people at the meeting talked about and explain why you remember going to this meeting. Thank you for listening my speaking! I hope you're having a nice...
- Tue Feb 02, 2016 7:05 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 2 - traffic and pollution problems
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1095
Writing task 2 - traffic and pollution problems
It is believed that the rise of petrol prices would solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. Others, however, think that there are better ways to solve them. On the one hand, increasing the price of petrol would fix the two big problems for a short period of time. Firstly, the high petrol p...
- Tue Feb 02, 2016 6:51 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 1 - Cement and concrete production
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2812
Writing task 1 - Cement and concrete production
Here is a link to the picture: http://prikachi.com/images.php?images/827/8610827z.png The diagrams give information about the equipment and stages used to create cement, and how it's used in concrete production. In the cement production, limestone and clay are crushed in a crusher in order to produc...
- Mon Dec 28, 2015 2:05 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Unpaid community service - Writing Task 2
- Replies: 1
- Views: 681
Unpaid community service - Writing Task 2
It's generally believed that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high schools programmes. Others, however, disagree with that statement. On the one hand, unpaid community services can teach high schools students a lot of things. Firstly, it'll help them become more orgranised, a...
- Mon Dec 28, 2015 1:48 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 1 - UK telephone calls
- Replies: 1
- Views: 678
Task 1 - UK telephone calls
http://prikachi.com/images.php?images/55/8543055g.png The chart gives information about the total number of minutes spent talking on the phone in the UK, split into 3 different categories. The the line people spent the the most time on was the local line. In 1995, they talked over 70 billion minutes...
- Sat Dec 19, 2015 5:45 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Describe a piece of electronic equipment that you find useful.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 13473
Re: Describe a piece of electronic equipment that you find useful.
Hello, Ecro. Thanks for sharing your recordings for parts I and II. Here are some thoughts. First, let me say that you are quite fluent. You obviously have a good mastery of vocabulary and grammar. You're confident in your speech, and you have good organization. I thought your introductions, abilit...
- Sat Dec 19, 2015 5:42 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please asses my Task 1
- Replies: 2
- Views: 947
Re: Please asses my Task 1
Yes, I think I could add more details, too.David.IELTS.Examiner wrote:Hi Ecro,
I think that you could have added a few more details, such as the size of the island, but basically this is a good report. Vocab and grammar are very good.
David
Thanks for the feedback!
- Sat Dec 19, 2015 5:39 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writings task 2 - Starting to learn another language at primary or secondary school
- Replies: 2
- Views: 899
Re: Writings task 2 - Starting to learn another language at primary or secondary school
Thank you for your feedback!David.IELTS.Examiner wrote:Hi Ecro,
This is a very good essay. I think that you have picked out the key arguments and provided some development.
Well done!
David
- Sun Dec 06, 2015 10:23 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writings task 2 - Starting to learn another language at primary or secondary school
- Replies: 2
- Views: 899
Writings task 2 - Starting to learn another language at primary or secondary school
It is believed that it is better for children to to learn a new language at primary school rather than secondary school and I totally agree with it. However, some disagree. On the one hand, starting to learn a new language at secondary school might be seen as as a logical option, because by that tim...
- Sun Dec 06, 2015 9:40 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please asses my Task 1
- Replies: 2
- Views: 947
Please asses my Task 1
http://prikachi.com/images.php?images/671/8501671U.png The two maps show information about an island's before and after state. In the beginning, the island was pretty much empty, isolated and inhabitable. It had a beach on the western side, and several trees occupied a small part of the island. Othe...