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by larry_li
Fri Oct 23, 2015 12:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Foreign Language Study
Replies: 1
Views: 626

Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Foreign Language Study

I greatly appreciate if you can evaluate my essay. Thank you very much~ :) Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? The highly globalised economy mean...
by larry_li
Thu Oct 22, 2015 2:23 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Extracurricular Activites
Replies: 2
Views: 1107

Re: Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Extracurricular Activites

Thank you very much ~! :D Personally, I think, it's well written. You have a good knowledge. I have corrected few errors. You can use the file diff application to see the changes. Cheers, ThomasEcafe.com Many news stories and documentaries have investigated the recent phenomenon that university stud...
by larry_li
Tue Oct 20, 2015 12:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Extracurricular Activites
Replies: 2
Views: 1107

Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Extracurricular Activites

I greatly appreciate if you can evaluate my essay. Thank you very much~ :) Nowadays, full-time university students tend to focus on their studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Many news stories...
by larry_li
Sun Oct 18, 2015 9:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Overweight
Replies: 3
Views: 1248

Re: Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Overweight

Dear Jill, This is so brilliant that you corrected my essay and gave me all the suggestions. Thank you very much~! :) Best regards, Larry Dear Larry The introduction is rather long, and the opening sentence distracts the reader. The question is about average weight increasing (not just obesity – whi...
by larry_li
Sun Oct 18, 2015 2:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Overweight
Replies: 3
Views: 1248

Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Overweight

I greatly appreciate if you can evaluate my essay. Thank you very much~ :) In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? News abou...
by larry_li
Fri Oct 16, 2015 6:08 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade my Task 2: Negative News
Replies: 0
Views: 2104

Pls grade my Task 2: Negative News

Please help grade my essay. Your help is greatly appreciated. Thank you :) Nowadays, the news is almost exclusively full of negative reporting, such as violent crime, fraud, etc. and some feel such horror-news is counter productive to the positive development of a healthy society. To what extent do ...
by larry_li
Fri Oct 16, 2015 2:06 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade my Task 2 writing (aiming 8 band): Television
Replies: 2
Views: 930

Re: Pls grade my Task 2 writing (aiming 8 band): Television

Thank you. Flick, you are so nice ~ :D (i once thought no one would grade my essay) Because of television, people do not communication with each other the way they did before they have television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Television sets are one of the most common household appliance...
by larry_li
Fri Oct 16, 2015 2:00 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls rate my task 2 essay: University Education
Replies: 2
Views: 2392

Re: Pls rate my task 2 essay: University Education

Thank you. you are awesome ~!!! :) Please help rate my essay. Your help is greatly appreciated. Modern societies need specialists in certain fields but not in others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. T...
by larry_li
Wed Oct 07, 2015 4:36 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls rate my task 2 essay: University Education
Replies: 2
Views: 2392

Pls rate my task 2 essay: University Education

Please help rate my essay. Your help is greatly appreciated. Modern societies need specialists in certain fields but not in others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relev...
by larry_li
Tue Oct 06, 2015 2:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Letter: 05-OCT
Replies: 2
Views: 780

Re: Can someone please review my Letter: 05-OCT

it seems to me rather too formal. its for your friend to read not your supervisor.
by larry_li
Tue Oct 06, 2015 3:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade my Task 2 writing (aiming 8 band): Television
Replies: 2
Views: 930

Pls grade my Task 2 writing (aiming 8 band): Television

I greatly appreciate if you can evaluate my essay. Thank you very much~ :) Because of television, people do not communication with each other the way they did before they have television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Television sets are one of the most common household appliances. Even t...
by larry_li
Mon Oct 05, 2015 2:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Traffic Jams
Replies: 2
Views: 1182

Re: Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Traffic Jams

thank you for your correction and suggestion :D
Paul Davey wrote:Here's the introduction. It's a very good one :geek:

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by larry_li
Sun Oct 04, 2015 3:03 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Traffic Jams
Replies: 2
Views: 1182

Pls grade my Task 2 writing: Traffic Jams

I greatly appreciate if you can evaluate my essay. Thank you very much~ :) The most effective way to reduce traffic jams in big cities is to ban the use of private cars and promote public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Traffic jams are one of the many chronic headaches shared by...
by larry_li
Fri Jul 24, 2015 11:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 evaluation needed, Thank you
Replies: 0
Views: 1178

Task 2 evaluation needed, Thank you

Please evaluate my Task 2 writing. All comments are welcome. Thank you. Some people feel schools should be responsible for providing lunch to primary and secondary students. Others think parents should send their children to school with box lunches made at home. Analyse both positions. Most primary ...
by larry_li
Wed Jul 15, 2015 6:40 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Speaking Partners (aiming 8)(w/ Self Intro audio clip)
Replies: 0
Views: 1372

Speaking Partners (aiming 8)(w/ Self Intro audio clip)

Hello everyone :D I am Larry, a newbie of this forum from Hong Kong. I want to practise with you doing IELTS speaking through Skype together so that we can help each other improve. I also am quite busy because of work, and I need to schedule everything ahead of time. One more thing, my current speak...
by larry_li
Wed Jul 15, 2015 3:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique my letter
Replies: 11
Views: 4928

Re: Please critique my letter

i hv a question. the task is asking the candidate to write about some good news at the office, but the central theme of your letter is about your victory in court against your boss, who, unless i misread, i suppose, is also your coworker's boss. except you are talking about your former employer, i d...