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The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there are few places which are unaffected by it.However, tourism rarely benefit the countries where tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Tourism is the golden coin of a nation in attaining multi-cultural st...

Hi Avijit,

Thanks for the feedback. I would consider the point of 4 paras in my next essay writing. You have pointed out about the length of the essay. But as I am apprised by IELTS board that the essay should not cross 250 words, otherwise examiner doesnt read the rest of it.

Thanks
Sam

Q: It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think? Physical problem is the real concern in the modern era. With the growth of obesity due to mechanical lifesty...