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by jaypatel
Sun Sep 27, 2015 4:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: plz rate the Essay asked in IELTS on 26th Sep 2015
Replies: 1
Views: 994

plz rate the Essay asked in IELTS on 26th Sep 2015

Some people believe that zoos where animals are kept in manmade environment will no longer remain in 21st century. Do you agree or disagree? It is undoubtedly true that zoos have become an alternative home for many animals and species these days. I do not agree with the view that such artificial ha...
by jaypatel
Mon Sep 14, 2015 7:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Plz rate this Essay on Younger Child effect
Replies: 1
Views: 769

Plz rate this Essay on Younger Child effect

Nowadays in some countries the numbers of children aged 15 and younger are increasing. What are the current and future effects of ever increasing population? It is true that the populations of some countries consist of many young children. In my opinion, this development tends to have several short...
by jaypatel
Sun Jul 26, 2015 6:48 am
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Topic: Importance of old buildings Task#2 Pls give ur feedback
Replies: 1
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Re: Importance of old buildings Task#2 Pls give ur feedback

Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress? My attempt In today’s world , it is seen that many governments are...
by jaypatel
Thu Jul 23, 2015 7:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review essay
Replies: 1
Views: 596

Re: please review essay

1. Lots of spelling mistakes.
2. the essay was below the 250 words. Therefore, the answer will be penalized.
3. The capital letter should be used only in the beginning of the sentence, I and for names only.
4. Never ask a question in your essay. It is not considered as academic.
by jaypatel
Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: plz rate the Essay asked in Academic on 23/7 at Aus
Replies: 0
Views: 1136

plz rate the Essay asked in Academic on 23/7 at Aus

Many companies ask their employees to wear a uniform at work. Write an essay and answer the following questions (1) In which type of jobs, wearing a uniform is a good thing? (2) What are the disadvantages of wearing a uniform at work? It is true that in many companies, employees need to dress up in...
by jaypatel
Wed Jul 22, 2015 12:33 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 essay - plz review n provide ur feeback
Replies: 2
Views: 1733

Re: Task 2 essay - plz review n provide ur feeback

Thanks mate for your corrections. I appreciate your help !
by jaypatel
Tue Jul 21, 2015 2:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 essay - plz review n provide ur feeback
Replies: 2
Views: 1733

Task 2 essay - plz review n provide ur feeback

The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? People have different vie...
by jaypatel
Fri Apr 24, 2015 4:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: plz evalute my essay - aim is 7
Replies: 2
Views: 4393

Re: plz evalute my essay - aim is 7

Thank you Dr.Matt for correcting my essay. :)
by jaypatel
Thu Apr 23, 2015 3:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: plz evalute my essay - aim is 7
Replies: 2
Views: 4393

plz evalute my essay - aim is 7

Some people believe that studying literature is important for individual character building while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both points of view and provide your own opinion. It is sometimes argued that literature learning is the most effective way to build valued personals. Person...
by jaypatel
Sun Apr 19, 2015 9:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls grade my essay for Task 2
Replies: 5
Views: 1204

Re: Pls grade my essay for Task 2

you could have cut short the reasons why education has become easy to get. I mean, you said that due to better infrastructure and more universities do not require to mention. Ideas like - Help industry to get people with right skill - Industry do not require to provide extensive training to fresh me...
by jaypatel
Sat Apr 18, 2015 12:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay : Plz review n your provide feedback n possible grade
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Views: 416

Essay : Plz review n your provide feedback n possible grade

Some people say that best way to improve public health is by increasing number of sports facilities. While others think that it has too little impact and other options should be required. Discuss both views and giver your own opinion. People have different views about the role of sport facilities t...
by jaypatel
Sat Apr 18, 2015 5:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Complaint letter - Aiming for 8 band
Replies: 0
Views: 473

Complaint letter - Aiming for 8 band

<b>You have recently come from a stay in hotel in a big city. During the time of your stay the weather was unpleasant and you was unhappy with the heating/cooling system in your room. Write a complain letter to the manager of hotel. In your letter - Give the details of what went wrong - Explain what...
by jaypatel
Sat Apr 18, 2015 4:49 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Complaint letter - Aiming for 8 band
Replies: 0
Views: 422

Complaint letter - Aiming for 8 band

<b>You read a newspaper advertisement regarding a discount sale at a particular shop. However, when you went to buy the goods you found that sale has ended. Write a letter to news publisher. In your letter, - Inform him/her where and when you went to the shop - What you felt when you came to know th...
by jaypatel
Sat Apr 18, 2015 4:16 am
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Topic: Please review this letter and give a score
Replies: 1
Views: 1005

Re: Please review this letter and give a score

There are few mistakes in sentence completion. I believe there were some commas (,) specially in first two paragraphs which were not required. It could have been removed or broken into two separate sentences. When comma is introduced, both the sentences must have logical connection. *** I am looking...
by jaypatel
Sat Apr 18, 2015 4:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Complaint letter - Aiming for 8 band
Replies: 0
Views: 2455

Complaint letter - Aiming for 8 band

You have heard that the local authority is planning to build a shopping mall in the centre of your town. You do not agree with this decision because there are already a lot of shops. Write a letter to the planning department. In your letter. - say why you are writing. - give reasons for your object...
by jaypatel
Sat Apr 18, 2015 4:02 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Complaint letter - Aiming for 8 band
Replies: 0
Views: 1116

Complaint letter - Aiming for 8 band

There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to local council. In you letter - Introduce yourself - Describe the problem - What you want them to do Dear sir/madam, I am writing this letter to express my concern about the issue that is affecting my family in my local area. There...