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by bench
Wed Oct 15, 2014 12:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WT2-GLOBALIZATION.DISCUSS. please comment on my work. TIA :)
Replies: 2
Views: 924

Re: WT2-GLOBALIZATION.DISCUSS. please comment on my work. TI

thanks.. how do you find my essay? you think i will get a 7 with this?
by bench
Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:58 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WT1 -PIE CHART
Replies: 0
Views: 499

WT1 -PIE CHART

The pie charts compare the population proportion of three different age group in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and the population projection in 2050. It is clear that the adults was the most populated age group in both countries in 2002. In 2050, it is predicted that the proportion of elderly in Italy and...
by bench
Mon Oct 13, 2014 10:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IMPROVE PUBLIC HEALTH. DISCUSS + OPINION
Replies: 0
Views: 371

IMPROVE PUBLIC HEALTH. DISCUSS + OPINION

Topic: some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion. It is true that the establishm...
by bench
Sun Oct 12, 2014 8:30 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WT1 - BAR CHART
Replies: 1
Views: 571

WT1 - BAR CHART

The bar chart compares the percentage of computer ownership according to level of education attained between 2002 and 2010. It is clear that there was a significant rise in all the platforms given over the 8 year period. It is also evident that as the education levels up, the proportion of computer ...
by bench
Sun Oct 12, 2014 7:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WT2-YOUNG PEOPLE WHO GO TO UNIVERSITY. DISCUSS+OPINION
Replies: 0
Views: 1082

WT2-YOUNG PEOPLE WHO GO TO UNIVERSITY. DISCUSS+OPINION

Topic: Some people believe that a country benefits greatly from a high percentage of young people who go to university, while others argue that it only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion. People have different views about the outcome of high proportion of young...
by bench
Thu Oct 09, 2014 4:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: W2-INTERNET OVER BOOKS AS MAIN SOURCE OF INFO. PLS CHECK.:)
Replies: 5
Views: 2368

Re: W2-INTERNET OVER BOOKS AS MAIN SOURCE OF INFO. PLS CHECK

thanks shreyas for the feedback.. Hope I will get a good result on my upcoming IELTS test..
by bench
Thu Oct 09, 2014 4:14 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WT2-CRIMES. PLS COMMENT. TIA :)
Replies: 3
Views: 754

Re: WT2-CRIMES. PLS COMMENT. TIA :)

thanks for the feedback :)
by bench
Wed Oct 08, 2014 8:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WT2-CRIMES. PLS COMMENT. TIA :)
Replies: 3
Views: 754

WT2-CRIMES. PLS COMMENT. TIA :)

Topic: many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? It is true that an increasing number of criminals have re-engaged into more crimes even after they suffered from it. There are various reasons for...
by bench
Tue Oct 07, 2014 2:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: W2-INTERNET OVER BOOKS AS MAIN SOURCE OF INFO. PLS CHECK.:)
Replies: 5
Views: 2368

W2-INTERNET OVER BOOKS AS MAIN SOURCE OF INFO. PLS CHECK.:)

TOPIC: Will modern technology, such as the internet ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information? Nowadays, people are more reliant to modern technology, such as the internet for various purposes like school research and this poses a threat to written materials such a...
by bench
Tue Oct 07, 2014 12:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WT2-GLOBALIZATION.DISCUSS. please comment on my work. TIA :)
Replies: 2
Views: 924

WT2-GLOBALIZATION.DISCUSS. please comment on my work. TIA :)

Topic: Even though Globalization affects the world’s economy in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss. It is no doubt true that Globalization has greatly influence the global economy as a whole. However, it has its own drawbacks. The benefits of Globalization can b...
by bench
Sat Oct 04, 2014 1:29 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WT2 - rejecting job offer. postive or negative?
Replies: 5
Views: 1421

Re: WT2 - rejecting job offer. postive or negative?

thanks for your comment.. but in my introduction I stated that there.is both positive and negative impact. so that means i should discuss both. or should i really stick to one point?
by bench
Fri Oct 03, 2014 1:53 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WT2- BANNING MOBILE PHONE.DISCUSS AND OPINION.
Replies: 0
Views: 929

WT2- BANNING MOBILE PHONE.DISCUSS AND OPINION.

Topic: Some people believe that mobile phones should be banned in the public, especially on public transports, in restaurants and cinema. Other think that mobile phones should be allowed to be used anywhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion. It is true that mobile devices have greatly influ...
by bench
Fri Oct 03, 2014 9:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WT2 - rejecting job offer. postive or negative?
Replies: 5
Views: 1421

WT2 - rejecting job offer. postive or negative?

Topic: Sometimes people are rejecting job opportunities due to their age or other circumstances. Is this a negative or a positive approach? Give your opinion and provide relevant examples. Nowadays, although there is a tight competition in landing a job, there are considerable number of people who ...
by bench
Tue Sep 30, 2014 6:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pie chart + table. please check. TIA :)
Replies: 0
Views: 3005

pie chart + table. please check. TIA :)

The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Answer: The pie charts illustrate how the three different countries deal with their hazardous waste, while the...
by bench
Tue Sep 30, 2014 5:38 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pie chart. corrections are highly needed. TIA :)
Replies: 0
Views: 286

pie chart. corrections are highly needed. TIA :)

The pie charts compare the electricity produced in five different sources in New Zealand and Germany between 1980 and 2010. It is clear that the most common source of electricity in New Zealand and Germany was coal and nuclear power respectively. Nuclear Power was never used in New Zealand to genera...
by bench
Tue Sep 30, 2014 12:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pie chart. i need your corrections.. TIA :)
Replies: 0
Views: 496

pie chart. i need your corrections.. TIA :)

The pie charts compare the main factors why people migrated in and out of the U.K. in 2007. It is clear that the main reason for moving, both immigration and emigration, was for employment purposes. The most common reason of migration to and from the U.K. in 2007 was for definite job, 30 percent for...
by bench
Tue Sep 30, 2014 11:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: table essay.please check :) TIA.
Replies: 2
Views: 480

Re: table essay.please check :) TIA.

thanks so much flick.. appreciated much :)
by bench
Tue Sep 30, 2014 11:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: table essay. PLEASE MARK. TIA ;)
Replies: 2
Views: 487

Re: table essay. PLEASE MARK. TIA ;)

thanks so much flick!
by bench
Tue Sep 23, 2014 7:37 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writing task 1- bar chart. Please mark my work. Thanks :)
Replies: 1
Views: 1089

writing task 1- bar chart. Please mark my work. Thanks :)

The bar chart compares the figures of pet owners in 6 different countries over a 9-year period. It is clear that the figures for people who own pet fluctuated for all the six countries in the given period. The most number of pet owners occurred in 1994, whereas the lowest was the year after, 1995. T...
by bench
Tue Sep 23, 2014 6:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: bar essay. i need your help to improve my writing.. TIA :)
Replies: 1
Views: 415

bar essay. i need your help to improve my writing.. TIA :)

The bar chart compares the occurrence of obesity among American teenager in terms of race or ethnicity between 1988-1944 and 2007-2008. It is clear that there was a significant rise in the proportion of teenager obesity for all the race in the both period given. The most obese teenager boys occurred...
by bench
Mon Sep 22, 2014 9:53 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: table essay. PLEASE MARK. TIA ;)
Replies: 2
Views: 487

table essay. PLEASE MARK. TIA ;)

The table compares the annual distance (in miles) travelled by person using different means of transportation from 1985 to 2000. It is clear that there was an increase in the total distance travelled by individual using the 8 modes over the 15 year period. 5 out of 8 modes dramatically rose, while t...
by bench
Mon Sep 22, 2014 8:57 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: table essay.please check :) TIA.
Replies: 2
Views: 480

table essay.please check :) TIA.

[The table compares the proportion of household who owned different durables in Britain in 10 year period. It is clear that there is a consistent increase in percentage of durable materials in British households in the given period. The television had the highest percentage mark in each year. In the...
by bench
Tue Aug 26, 2014 7:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 sample essay - Please check :)
Replies: 1
Views: 462

Writing task 2 sample essay - Please check :)

Some people believe that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and be given special treatment. Discuss both views and give your opinion. People have different views about streaming intelligent chil...